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Loved the drop !!!

Really nice drop.
The wobbles are awesome too but i think they are drowning your drums in some parts.But i think the problem is in the drums not in the bass synths.They sounds a bit default (as in nonprocessed).Maybe some more EQ and layering is in order?
Id suggest adding a highly reverbed clap and some more hats maybe.
Also some short FX would be nice to play in the main part.Great track.
Keep it up !
10/10 5/5 :)

Well...

I have pretty decent monitors and a 15 inch sub and i have to agree with haxory about the distortion.The drums are completely drowned out by the bass, but the synth itself is pretty nice.You should just EQ it and maybe lower the volume.
Also the drums seem too unprocessed.Beef them up a bit.Other than that pretty nice work on the melodies.Keep up the good work.
8/10 5/5 :)

Not bad at all

Really liking the drums.
The bass needs some more power though.Maybe add some distortion or use the waveshaper, but dont go too hard cause it will ruin it.Also some chorus will be nice too.I'd like to suggest adding another bass too (hearing this you have 3 of them with different syncs 1/4 1/8 and 1/16) with a lower LFO speed to create more variation.I might also suggest adding an alarm fx (or some other uplifting synth) hitting with the snare in this particular song.
Other than that good job.Keep it up !
10/10 5/5 :)

rashred responds:

you rate it 10/10 yet it says 9 xD

Pretty nice for a first try.

The vocals fit the song very good.The bass melody is really nice but the synth itself need alot of tweaking.First off all EQ it properly so its a bass (Not a sub bass and a bass in one) and maybe add a tiny bit of reverb on it.And as i mentioned you need a sub bass to bring out the power of the main bassline itself.
As for the drums and perc, i think the kick is pretty nice but when you create your sub bass it will affect it (its a bit low) and you should probably EQ or change it a bit.
The clap is nice too but i think it would be good if you add another one, shorter and maybe a bit harder with reduced reverb.And your hats are lacking the very reverb the clap has.
Overall a nice track indeed.Just need some tweaking.Good job !

8/10 5/5 :)

mcdougall57 responds:

Thankyou :) Nice imput and I'm still learning but I will give your suggestions a go.

Like the drums.

The drums and perc are very good on this one.Good job!
Really like that you used a clap.The hats are also pretty nice imo.
The bass melody is nice but the synth itself is a bit weak.Maybe add a bit distortion and EQ it.Also adding a sub would make the bass stand out more so try it.
Other than that, great job.Seeing this is a WIP i hope there will be alot more going on when you finish it.

8/10 5/5

Quite a nice intro.

Cant say much cause its all up to you ti finish this track.From the direction its going i say maybe add some fading ambient like synths when the break hits.Also add some deep reverbed pads for a more solid background.The sub bass i like alot,but i think it would be nice to add a reese modulated with a LP or HP filter maybe with a low sync of lets say about 2/1.Other than its all up to you mate.Hope i gave you some stuff to think about and i'm looking forward hearing the finished piece.

10/10 5/5 :)

la-yinn responds:

Hey man, thanks for the constructive review! Sorry for responding so late, I kind of overlooked it until now.

I'm going to finish this track, but I also have a killer groove going on with roughly the same perc and a totally different style. I'm not sure which one I'm going to focus on, but we'll see.

I'll have a look at your stuff too. :- )

Like the idea but the result should be better.

Well its overall a very nice loop.I hear a pretty good drumloop behind the OVERPOWERING bass.There's too much reverb on the bass in my opinion.
One advice mate, your drums and your bass are your main elements and they should sounds equally present in the track and here its just a very loud bass and some background breaks.Maybe compress the bass, beef up the drums and EQ them a bit.I think that you should lower the volume of the bass and add some distortion.Other than that great job.I hope i was of some help and would like to hear this if you ever finish it.

8/10 5/5
PS. The bassline is modulated with a BP filter am i right?

BlackVen0m responds:

I know, I uploaded the early verison of it, I had fixed that problem with the over reverb and yes, the bassline is mainly modulated with a BP cutoff. :)

I can't do much about it now though that the VST I used had completely ruined itself... @_@

Impressive intro !

The intro creates a really nice atmosphere.I really like all the background pads and the opening drums.The drumloop is also really nice but i think you should lower (or remove) the reverb on it, cause its a bit too heavy.Other than that, great work.
Keep it up.
10/10 5/5.
:)

Sounds a bit too stereo.

Once again sick basslines and drums.Your FX samples are really well processed.
My only complaint is that some of the main elements (such as the bassline and the drums) sound too wide, and they should be nearly mono.

10/10 5/5

Not sure if its liquid.

Seems to have alot of neurofunk influences.Very minimal (in a good way),and really technical again :D.Great use of EQ, automation and layering.Your drumloops sound very flowing and rhythmic.I can't say anything else other than GREAT JOB !

10/10 5/5
Get your name out there, i'm sure you can go far in producing.

Qshunt responds:

Thanks for the great comment! :)

and thanks for the great score too :)

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